By the way, yeah, I changed Suzume's hair style a bit. And yay for shading and an angry Riza! =D. Okay, not really. But anyway.
But, so ends chapter 2. I feel accomplished, getting it over with this fast, after how long the first one took. Or even the same amount of pages of the first one XP. SO, now you guys have to tell me what you thought =3. How's the story progressing? Is the art getting better or worse ( I think worse XD)? Are you looking forward to the next chapter?
So telllll meeeee. Seriously, comments in general motivate me to no end, and I need that right now XP.
Anyway, I'm not gonna take a break between chapters this time for fear of getting lazy again, so next week should be the chapter cover and first page of chapter 3. =D
In the meantime, those of you haven't entered, don't forget about the contest! At this point the deadline's looking like late April. I think. But yeah, so far I've got maybe...5 or 6 entries? Not bad, I'm not complaining, but I'm thinking for fairness' sake a few more would be really great :P
Contest: http://dreamcatcher.smackjeeves.com/comics/311080/contest-time-d/
SO, I'm sure you're all sick of me talking now, so see you next week! =]
I reaaaally love how Rize looks on this page when she's walking away.
I don't really have TOO much time to answer your questions properly RIGHT NOW, but I personally think that everything's just fine. :3 As for getting better/worse, I don't know. e__e I'ma have to look back, 'cause I can't remember stuff like that.
And yeah, definitely looking forward to the next chapter. :D Keep it up.
I'd say your drawings are better at drawing riza. you know, a friend of mine told me that if you keep drawing the same thing over and over, you'll keep getting better at it. keep that tip in mind!
... I agree with Phooka... your shading, detail is improved; and I enjoyed the last couple of pages ~ esp. showing Reza with different kinds of emotion, ranging from upset frustration to anger to whatever... keep at it!
